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Copy for Manchester Arndale Shopping Centre website

The Arndale Shopping centre is going to be updating the Lush page on their website next week so I'd like to get some new copy for their homepage on there. Normal jazz chatting about the company, what we do, what we sell etc but would be lovely if we could also talk about some of the unique features of this new shop. 'Only Lush shop in the whole world that has a greenhouse', also the special party area too? Word limit: 100 words

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  • Jun 3 2016
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  • Jun 8, 2016

    Admin Response

    Hi Jess! I've assigned this to Jiggly (he's up there today) - could you work with him on this? :) - Danika 

    Hiya, Can we get some more info on this please. IS there a deadline and can you provide the link to the website please? 

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  • Guest commented
    June 9, 2016 10:41

    Hiya! Deadline is ASAP as the Arndale Shopping Centre have requested it.

    Link is https://www.manchesterarndale.com/stores/lush

  • Paul Shane commented
    June 9, 2016 11:50

    If I reply to this does it mean Jess sees it too?

    Sorry, I've been trying to keep slack at bay all day. Every time I send a
    message I get two or more back! So hectic.

    Jess, I edited some copy that we did for a vegan event. Do you think this
    does the job? Is it too long?

    Let me know if you need any more fiddles :)x

    *Goodness gracious, great balls of bicarb! Do you like your cosmetics
    fresh, handmade and packed with zesty fruits and essential oils? If so,
    enter a world of juicy hair products, exciting bath bombs, gentle skin care
    and much, much more. Take a trip on the wild side and pop over to Lush.
    Just follow your nose!*

  • Guest commented
    June 9, 2016 12:18

    I see it!! Is there anyway it can be a bit more Arndale specific? Talking about the awesome party area and it being the only Lush shop in the world to have a greenhouse?

  • Paul Shane commented
    June 9, 2016 12:47

    Forgot the greenhouse! Do you need to say 'ground floor' or something? It's
    obvious it's Arndale if it's on the Arndale site isn't it? How about this?
    Bit of fiddling done to the ending.

    *Do you like your cosmetics *
    *fresh, handmade and packed with zesty fruits and essential oils? If
    so, enter a world of juicy hair products, exciting bath bombs, gentle skin
    care and much, much more. Come say hello; we have a great party area and
    the only Lush shop in the world with a greenhouse! Just follow your nose!
    ;)x*

  • Guest commented
    June 9, 2016 12:53

    Amazing! Thank you x